Tuesday, January 24, 2006

Dark Of Night Comments

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The sounds of the creaking floor used to bring comfort as she drifted off to sleep
And then he came, and the darkness became her biggest fear causing her knees to go weak
She knows that he will come, for he comes with the night
The things he does, the things he says she knows are not right
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Crystal Nealey
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Cecil Hickman 11 February 2006

a very well written poem of fear and deep emotions very well done with wonderful flow and images.

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Elya Thorn 24 January 2006

This poem is so deep, just amazing! The imagery is great, and also the words you used! Elya Thorn

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