Dark Night Comments

I love this....................great poem

your lies were darker your love more crueler Night was the time you slit my tongue Night was the time i cry you a river, such a fine and lovely poem .. sadness at ist core. The sense of loss and abuse. Love and its strange ways… cruelty in ist cruellest form. Thank you dear poetess for this gift of a poem from you…….. thank you again. tony

Continue to keep the flow of the poetic inspiration flowing. You have written a very good poem.

great great work. I like tha parallelism used here. Wonderful.

wow that was a sad night good work i vote

A great anaphora; using night to create a parallelism and explicit metaphors.

A sad but very beautiful poem. Great write.