Friday, May 29, 2009

Dark Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a dark night, to some it can be a fright,
kids that are walking threw alleys, valleys and streets,
they quickly disappear, you can hear their heart beats,
pounding in so much fear, that not even one person can bare,
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Angela Thiel 05 October 2020

oh the irony...does this beautiful poem take you back?

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this poem tells me you have as big heart. let it grow.

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Brandon w 29 May 2009

wow.you put a lot of emotion in your poems i really like that.another good write! !

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