Saturday, June 2, 2012

Dark Love Story Comments

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I couldn't be there
present and accounted for
to take one for the team
keep those wolves from the door
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Simon Collins
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Captain Cur 02 June 2012

A very strong willed poem with just enough rhyme to give it flow but not too much to take away the strength in the words survive blow. Great poem skillfully written.

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Eric Cockrell 02 June 2012

loved this one, especially the last six lines! the defiance of the heart that survives!

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