Dark Light Comments

In which I learned how to walk How to talk and smile with wind And how to weep in silence too This darkness had shown me truth So I went into light with closed eyes ------ a poem full of sentiments which touched my heart.................Great!

like a dream in the shadow of the future...a futuristic poem....a daylight of today.....wonderful as it portray....good fitting to be shelves in the library... thank you for sharing this poem... God bless...a 10 +

Hey, .. I feel this one of your best poems.. Lot to think here...Since this is written in first person., this becomes a original poem.. Yet, it has universal value in the sens that every one is in a search for this so called light or the enlightment.. This is very nicely done..10... regards// best wishes Shan

the blind will see the light. a ten

In one way what you say is correct, and one should not see any light direct, in particular the sun light, as it may burn the eyes.

Good write....10ssssssssss

I understand that there is divine light which is received by a blind person.Nice abstract poem, lovely to read....10++++++++

People get night vision in the dark.

fine metaphorical expression! 10+

the light in the dark...dark though not active is pensive and your poem here does the same a re creative write