Tuesday, April 12, 2005

Dark Hole Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the darkness
Lay me down
In confinement
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Lynette Dias Gouveia
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Poetry Hound 12 April 2005

What do you mean by 'enchase' and 'impletion? ' This must be a very personal poem for you because it's not completely clear what you're trying to say, especially towards the end.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 12 April 2005

It isn't just a recent thing with you, then. I like this very much. H enchase? Deliberate?

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