Saturday, June 20, 2020

Dark Heart Cries Comments

Rating: 5.0

She was like the beautiful flowers; oh more than that, moon, sun……. imaginative heaven, perhaps more these all. She was with good health with two girls children and husband. Good family was there. The sun as usual comes to shine her residential building. The river stream is in pregnant flowing with a floating rhythm of boatman flute playing. Daily life was there fair though I was hardly visitor of her conjugal life. Now the home is full of mother-less child crying.

Tears weather
Feared every earth lane
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 June 2020

Sadness! ! ! Life and death. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 June 2020

A deeply moving and poignant poem. Life and death have their own course. Death can come in a beautiful and bountiful life. Beautifully crafted and well executed.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 June 2020

you say ur 34 but look 24 and no more for how long will you saty at 34 lets wish u a birthday be sure

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very sad poem friend

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A lovely life yet meeting cruel future or sometimes we have such a terrible dream..Beautifully penned 10+++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 June 2020

A well written haibun poem. Simply impressive....10+++

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