Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Dark Hallway Comments

Rating: 5.0

Outside the rain is pouring so hard
The thunder and lightning just got it's start
KRAKOOM! the thunder hits something nearby
everything goes black in front of my eyes
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Earl Danza
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Kayla Mclendon 07 August 2009

very cool i like ur poetry keep writin its hard 2 get inspired anymore but keep tryin and dont let any1 bring u down

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Kali Abyss 19 June 2009

This is a nice poem, I like it :)

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Cat Tiger 17 June 2009

You're obviously influenced by hip hop. Too bad. Learn grammar and sentence structure.

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