Dark Girl Comments

this one reminds me of myself and I loved every line

at last...someone who respects the emo kids...*lol* eni da kid

I have only read a few of your poem, Uriah, so far... But, I have found myself intrigued by your writing style. dan

this is an awesome poem, Uriah. very Beatific! Jake

ah uriah.. you've done it again, you have left your heart exposed in this poem of dedication to love. you never stop to amaze me :) HBH

I'm rocked, Uriah, well and truly. Outstanding writing. Warm regards, Gina.

Strong imagery is displayed in this poem which speaks so eloquently of the bonding of two lonely souls. Regards, Sandra

Beautiful.........the last stanza says it all. Great poem Uriah. Sincerely, mary

insight into self the other and the monumental necessity of the heart for closeness that great declaration creating poetry of the utmost honesty and beauty.