Tuesday, February 3, 2015

Dark Future With Bright Hope Comments

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Forty eight leaves has fallen from this tree,
Diamond, pearl, gold and silver; their degree,
All fallen into Unseen River and lost forever,
Painting them, the smug will come back never,
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Susan Williams 16 December 2020

Forty eight leaves has fallen from this tree, Diamond, pearl, gold and silver; their degree, All fallen into Unseen River and lost forever, Painting them, the smug will come back never,

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Rajnish Manga 04 February 2015

A poetic commentary on life, its achievements, its worries, its hopes, its ups and downs and uncertainties. Extremely beautiful poem. I would like to quote a couple of lines: Forty eight leaves has fallen from this tree / Diamond, pearl, gold and silver; their degree, Thank you very much, Sir.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 03 February 2015

Very beautiful eights leaves fallen from tree. I do not know how many leaves are to fall in my inner cell but still I wait to fill my mind in between dark future and bright hope. Wonderful poem shared really.

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