Saturday, April 15, 2006

Dark Forest Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have not written for a long time
I have felt lost in a dark forest
surrounded by a dark thicket of trees
as far as my eyes can see
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Mary Nagy 23 April 2006

I love this! The way you've used the forest and the trees representing your past actions......you're questioning what they represent-very powerful. Great job! Sincerely, Mary

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Jessica Evans 15 April 2006

This is a breath-taking poem. It's very creative and imaginative. I really enjoyed it. A lot of us (including myself) are lost in a dark forest. Your strong crisp words express this sense of being lost in darkness superbly. Jessica

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