I walked through the lanes across the hill
Moonlight glittered through each and every sill
What I saw was a gorgeous sight
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misty, a bit dark and caries the sand with it a beautiful well rhymed couplet write imaginative and fluid...makes for interesting reading well done :) cheers
never ever wondered that i will call a dark fantasy............ beautiful... very beautiful....
In a dark fantasy, a dark prince appeared, looted your heart and took you to his forbidden land. Forbidden land? Till the last you maintain the tempo. Beautiful poem creating an enchanting world.
Thanks a ton Saddat! ! ! it was great seeing your comment! ! !