Tuesday, April 10, 2012

Dark Fantasy Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walked through the lanes across the hill
Moonlight glittered through each and every sill

What I saw was a gorgeous sight
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Blossom Mist
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Blossom Mist 10 May 2012

Thanks a ton Saddat! ! ! it was great seeing your comment! ! !

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Saadat Tahir 10 May 2012

misty, a bit dark and caries the sand with it a beautiful well rhymed couplet write imaginative and fluid...makes for interesting reading well done :) cheers

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Vipins Puthooran 14 April 2012

mysterious frenzy/excellent poem! ! 10

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Sharad Juneja 13 April 2012

never ever wondered that i will call a dark fantasy............ beautiful... very beautiful....

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Blossom Mist 11 April 2012

Thank you.. for the lovely comment! !

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Rajendran Muthiah 10 April 2012

In a dark fantasy, a dark prince appeared, looted your heart and took you to his forbidden land. Forbidden land? Till the last you maintain the tempo. Beautiful poem creating an enchanting world.

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