Thursday, September 4, 2008

Dark Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

DARK EYES

I LOOK UPON THE DARKENED SKIES,
ALL I SEE IS HIS DARK EYES.
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Rik Bertrand
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Manonton Dalan 26 September 2008

would i be scared of dark eyes, no i'll shine flashlight. firm statements. thanks for sharing.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 September 2008

A nice composition with optimistic attitude. Love it.10+

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Very scary good strong composition with several typos.I enjoy your poetry wonderful imagination.

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Rik Bertrand

Rik Bertrand

Portland, Oregon
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