Dark Dream Comments

Wonderful write that simply flows from beginning to end...10+++

your stanza is amazing! ! ! this is really cool. I am going to put it on my favs good job. Becca

without the dark side of dreams we would be at a loss to evaluate, alas we are often drawn on by a desire to purge ourselves and seek into the dark side, from creative curiosity inspiring10

Once I had this aweful dream where everyone was playing beautiful instruments for me and the more they played for me the sicker I got. I woke up heckov sick. I loved my dream though and it took me a while to realize that it was a nightmare.

Imagery and content of the poem is nice. Love it.

Awesome! Got a surreal feel to it, definately lives up to its title, Fairplay!

Wow...seems like a much different tone for you...love it! ! ! Love the theme, love the imagery, love the phrasing...love now being the key word...good job. Coach

the last line is a poetic pearl...yes, the dark dreams...really, viola...the demons won't allow a sleep...ten grade

Beautiful word play and imagery... as always!

The last line is a killer dear lovely poem now look for the light thanks Chris

A deep, moving, and very well written piece

'dreams are every tear drops friend' i like that.well stated thanks for sharing

really powerful i love it you inspire me to write good poems