Dark Desire Comments

A dark mood well expressed. You paint a dramatic poem picture. Warm regards, Sandra

Dark Desires and Stark Emptiness.......... Filled with angsts and anguishes!

So much a power poem.... so much darkness there and no way to escape! I did listen that 'magic works' 10

VEry touching indeed........oh, I find this very disturbing and very deeply intriguing...Very well written.

-Anticipation...lonely hand awaits -my disease is terminal- ...the only cure, is a kiss...! (medicine dropper) administer small dose of LOVE, Day by day, thou Orb's Light grows stronger, as the stars in the sky linger SO SHALL I! Linger eternally for your smile... Hugssssssssss Peace Angel of Love

my fingers don't fondle my arms don't cradle awww.... Reshma the wizard..

hhhmmm a dark desire of love and passion, well written my friend............Thanks! for the sensual read! ! ! 10+++

**Reflections in Illusions Speak truth in the dark Studded like stars The veils in folds Seven thousand in number The penetration needed The gaze of highest intensity Beyond time and space How would have the splash And the music of water The splendid water lily Had the scents of jasmine From the back of antelope When the last breath Before the explosion Of the mounted masculine That creates The music was celestial At the ascent That might have had Notes we discover A string of rebeck Or the hollowness of reed Hearkened One such note Half breathe Your body turned fluid In ethereal evaporation The dark feminine cloud The dark womb of earth Into smoke in waters By beast birds in space Like aroma of wild flowers The intensity of love Was the song That leaning neck On the shoulder of beloved There are reflections in illusions For the eyes to behold Of the unseen