Monday, October 12, 2009

Dark Dark Girl Comments

Rating: 4.7

Dark girl so filled with strife
Dark Dark girl she'll take your life
Dark girl stay for a while
Dark Dark girl she makes me smile
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kyle potter
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Umar Kabir 03 April 2015

I absolutely love the last line

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Umar Kabir 03 April 2015

i absolutely love the final line

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melanie stinnett 12 January 2015

I love this

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Crystal Martin 28 August 2013

i can definetly relate im like the dark girl but there is no light for me good poem

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Dragon Crenshaw 28 November 2012

I CAN SO RELATE TO THIS REALLY GOOD POEM REALLY GOOD

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Jessee Bennett 02 November 2012

I loved this poem. Its one of the ones that is simpal but elagant.

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Savano Istork 03 October 2012

I loved this poem. It's one of my favorite poems.

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Aya Kishiko 01 September 2011

It should be LIGHT girl.. negative poems are all over in here - it's good to express your feelings, but isn't it tiring? ..^_^..pfufufu.try to smile and enjoy life once in a while. fighting!

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Cleide Tatyana Almeida 03 June 2010

One word; well actually I need to write over twenty characters apparently. Now that I've done that, here's the word: AWESOME!

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Kyle Potter 26 April 2010

thank you, i had a lot of fun writing it about my friend that hated the poem :)

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Mackenzy Edmonds 26 April 2010

its so amazing i luv it

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Jamie Stone 16 December 2009

I love this, there is so much feeling in it

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i like it nice work ++10++

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