Saturday, December 24, 2016

Dark, Dark, Dark Comments

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O dark, dark, dark, amid the blaze of noon,
Irrecoverably dark, total eclipse
Without all hope of day!
As I enter the dark world of this online poetry site
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Tomas Prato
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Bri Edwards 28 November 2018

(CONT.) 2- BUT, here we can sometimes blame PH for grammatical atrocities, especially this past year! ! I say “nethermost” is a ‘new word’ for me. Check for a missing period in stanza #3. ; ( To MyPoemList. Bri (:

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Bri Edwards 28 November 2018

1 – yes, a spell has enveloped all who dared to tread here! ! [[ and some smells as well ]] favorite lines so far: ..... I see sentences hacked to death, And stanzas swooning (out of breath) i applaud your criticism...[not about ME or MINE of course]..., and i ..[ yes, I sometimes do not capitalize “i” in my messages and comments! ]…would feel remiss if i did not mention the parenthesis missing from stanza # 1. (CONT.)

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