Monday, December 7, 2020

Dark Cosmic Cloud Comments

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Black seems like nothingness, maybe that's why
nebulae dark looked like ‘holes in the sky'
as Herschel exclaimed when he saw on high
a spot in Orion that caught his eye.
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Harley White
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Bill Cantrell 07 December 2020

Yes, this is the great Harley White, which one day will be be revealed as one one of the most intelligent and down to earth poetess of all time!

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Harley White 08 December 2020

Ah, there you are again, Bill, with your unfaltering support for my work! I have no words to express my gratitude for your noticing my ongoing poetic efforts! Thank you so very much!

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Bill Cantrell 07 December 2020

Oh so cool! ! ! and yes we know they with today’s technology...millions of stars and galaxies will reveal themselves in this black abyss....but unsolved puzzles are so. Dry intriguing...you certainly must agree! Your last stanza is so impressive that I tattoo it on my soul dear Harley, thank goodness for a great poetess as you, your work is unmatchable!

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Harley White 08 December 2020

Your lavish praise is like a tonic for my poetic spirit! Yes, such an evocative ‘space’ in space seemed to beg for a poem. Indeed I struggled over that last stanza, especially the final two lines, and I’m pleased that you found it memorable! I hardly know how to thank you, Bill, for your generous words!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 07 December 2020

Space fascinates me big time. If we could spend our time studying science we would be squabbling less about religion. Lets do science. Thanks for sharing.

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Harley White 07 December 2020

I agree about science as well as the fascination with space. Thank you for reading the poem and commenting.

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