Sunday, April 17, 2011

Dark Corner Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m in the corner
In the dark
You cant see me
Falling apart
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Jennifer Alejandra
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Ken E Hall 13 March 2015

Dark corner indeed to be so sad from a unrequited love not worth all that anguish in this life...glad that as the years go by you are given a different picture thru your eyes ...nice to read the feelings so clear...regards

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Ken E Hall 13 March 2015

Dark corner indeed to be so sad from a unrequited love not worth all that anguish in this life...glad that as the years go by you are given a different picture thru your eyes ...nice to read the feelings so clear...regards

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Jean Dament 17 April 2011

You expressed your pain well here in this sad but well written poem. We may not see your pain, but you made us feel it with you here. Nicely done. PS-'peak'-should be 'peek' ok. Spiritsong

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Buried Alive 17 April 2011

sad pretty poem. very nice rhyme

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