Monday, July 17, 2006

Dark Clouds Comments

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Dark clouds drifting by
Throughout most days
Are easily ignored.
But some days completely
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Sheila Burns
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Brian Dorn 15 October 2006

Great write, Sheila... we do have power over the 'clouds', but it's up to us whether or not to use it. Well done! ! Brian

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Tailor Bell 23 September 2006

i know a rainman...maybe now a rainwoman...this verse rains my field my heritage, so thank you, Sheila. wonderful piece. -Tailor

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Séamus Fox 20 July 2006

I liked this Sheila nice the way the rhyme comes in in last part of each stanza. Nice mix of different styles. Séamus

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