Monday, December 15, 2008

Dark Cloud Comments

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Dark cloud…
Storm of thunder,
Rage of power all,
Over the land it will come over,
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Evelynne Wren
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Vivid poem, full of expression. Thank goodness for mercy and grace.. grace is undeserved favour. There are always bad apples among the good. Good one! ; D

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Joseph Poewhit 15 December 2008

A lot of underlying hate in the poem. There are some good people to.

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Evelynne Wren

Evelynne Wren

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