Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Dark Cloud Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dark cloud looms around me
Hiding in the shadows of pain
And blocking the sun
It never strays far
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Valarie Paterson
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Ayesha Sartawi 08 October 2008

it is effective, deep and surrounded by sadness its actually unique i liked it good luck keep writing

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