Dark Caverns Comments

I like this poem it shows strength and passion

In a few words you capture what's in store for the hero of the myths when he begins his life's quest.

We shall never fear of darkness for there's a light beam in our heart If the we're meant to take the trial It's time to see how strong we are.....

i like this one it reminds thanks for sharing

Vivid imagery painted on canvas of tranquility...........triumph against dark evils...spelled out like hundreds mazes.............need a peace of mind to crack the meaning beneath the caverns of mind.Excellent writes my buddy Colin.I'll read more of your powerful poetry soon.Keep up the good work! ! your new buddy, Dean Nordy, US of A.

Hi Colin -you spread the word that evil lurks in Dark Caverns I thank you for a great write and I never did trust that devil and if I hear in in my brain I will tell him to get lost! regards Ken e

Very Impressive, ..With every line I was drawn in to read more. good work.

Feels like I played Devil May Cry, against demon and evil... And like I read The Lord Of The Rings... It's full of neverending imagination... Coooolll... well done...! ! ! Naruezt Kaede, ,

I appreciate your use of imagery. Very impressive!

clear imagery...perfect picture of inner fear...

Great! I know exactly what your saying. I praise God I never have to be afraid of those dark caverns, I know this from experience. Know matter what temptation you do (and will) fall only proves it right. [There is pleasure in sin, but only for a season.]

i loved this one............sir...as always... a great write

dark caverns a deep dark exploration! beau

this is dark and mysteroius i like it! -ryan

I LIKED THIS A WHOLE BUNCH. Great Work

spirit freedom i love that nice poem keep writing thank you

Well written poem of what's in store if you start the true quest for spiritual freedom.

Thaks sir--- for this nice write. I am not fearful of Satan I have my GOD with me-- I love all my brothers and sisters as he wished us to love I like to follow this commandment of HIS. ++++++++10 as always love anju

yes, you are right colin, within the deep caverns of our mind all deamons live... and all bright thoughts also that you write as poetry...

You have a wonderfully descriptive way with words...loved this poem...thank you...