Monday, February 25, 2019

Dark Cave And An Ocean Comments

Rating: 4.5

Decompose my pre-exposed notions
Dripping wet now I'm drowning in a ocean
Motions over take me wave by wave
The under current pulls me under
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Tamara Turner
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Savita Tyagi 09 September 2022

Very optimistic and beautiful poem of great imagery. Congratulations!

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 09 September 2022

Congratulations on POD for the second time

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 09 September 2022

Wonderful poem, Tamara. Congratulations on your beautiful poem getting selected the Poem Of The Day. Most deserving.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 December 2019

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Tamara. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Matthew Holloway 13 March 2019

nice write and use of emotion

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 13 March 2019

This is really a great poem to fight and insist to defy and challenge difficulties. congrats for selection of POD.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 March 2019

Pose! ! ! Prose, Decompose; Bruised. Depression! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 March 2019

A positive poem. There may be many ups and downs in life. But we should have courage to fight back. That is life. A very inspiring poem on fighting depression. 'I'm confused, wet, and bruised from the rocks that were crushed on my exposed skin I look a little beat up but I continue to fight I won't let them in.'...is very nice. Congrats.

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Adrian Flett 13 March 2019

I like the metaphor and the irregular rhymes in a poem that makes the reader think and imagine the physical experience of going down, almost drowning but not giving in. It's? ? ? ?

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Prabir Gayen 13 March 2019

I look a little beat up but I continue to fight I won't let them in. They will not win and I will not drown Even if some days feel like I'm pulled underneath the ground Underneath the ground its my cave but will not let it be my resting place Its not my grave...... very beautiful

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Prabir Gayen 13 March 2019

Congratulation dear poet......very beautiful poem.... thanks

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Jennifer Birchall 13 March 2019

A very expressive description on the struggles of depression. Well done for POD Tamara. Great poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 March 2019

A well crafted poem of the day, Ma'am Tamara. Congrats for being chose....10+++++++++++++

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