Decompose my pre-exposed notions
Dripping wet now I'm drowning in a ocean
Motions over take me wave by wave
The under current pulls me under
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Congratulations on POD for the second time
Wonderful poem, Tamara. Congratulations on your beautiful poem getting selected the Poem Of The Day. Most deserving.
Write comment. Such a nice poem, Tamara. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
This is really a great poem to fight and insist to defy and challenge difficulties. congrats for selection of POD.
Pose! ! ! Prose, Decompose; Bruised. Depression! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A positive poem. There may be many ups and downs in life. But we should have courage to fight back. That is life. A very inspiring poem on fighting depression. 'I'm confused, wet, and bruised from the rocks that were crushed on my exposed skin I look a little beat up but I continue to fight I won't let them in.'...is very nice. Congrats.
I like the metaphor and the irregular rhymes in a poem that makes the reader think and imagine the physical experience of going down, almost drowning but not giving in. It's? ? ? ?
I look a little beat up but I continue to fight I won't let them in. They will not win and I will not drown Even if some days feel like I'm pulled underneath the ground Underneath the ground its my cave but will not let it be my resting place Its not my grave...... very beautiful
A very expressive description on the struggles of depression. Well done for POD Tamara. Great poem.
A well crafted poem of the day, Ma'am Tamara. Congrats for being chose....10+++++++++++++
Very optimistic and beautiful poem of great imagery. Congratulations!