Sunday, October 28, 2007

Dark Beautiful Woman Comments

Rating: 5.0

Days are consumed with passionate fever
Pursuing a dark, beautiful woman
With tantalizing storm-concealing eyes
And a proud face
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Uriah Hamilton
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Marcia Morris 04 November 2007

A very nice write...the ending had me scratching my head though...lol..wondering if a beautiful woman gives more trouble...huh?

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Uloia Norris Moore 28 October 2007

The mere beauty such sight be told the pleasure in his eyes would hold no harbor for such a thought well done.Thank you.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 28 October 2007

Another beautiful write Uriah.. Fantastic poetry..10

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