Friday, February 24, 2012

Dark Arts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes they would hurl a voice at you
And you would try to fix it like a pinned butterfly,
You knew it was a muscular game,
Which could surprise like a bend in a river.
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Jay Alexander
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Eric Cockrell 24 February 2012

well written... your use of imagery is good.

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Dave Walker 24 February 2012

Great poem, like it. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Past Life.

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