Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Dark Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

All she wants, the peace and a shelter
God is dead? once said Wolter

In the crowded and nasty city at night
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nader baheri
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Mohsen Fard 09 November 2013

Fantastic title for a fantastic poem.

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Valsa George 27 February 2013

Many are forced into prostitution through poverty and want! The people who secretly enjoy them pelt stones at them from a distance! This double dealing is most abominable. These fallen women shouldn't be condemned, but have to be looked upon with sympathy! A good poem lashing at the hypocrisy of the society!

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A Dark Lifetime . 17 February 2013

Wow! Amazing! The title with a text like that.. Very emotional. This poem made me sob and think about us human again. You are completely right! I wonder why people don't realize these things. But telling such a story in a poem that also rhymes... Amazing man. Truly amazing!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 30 January 2013

Yes, Every customer of her should be registered and asked to contribute for her Old age Fund and medical insurance and My humble opinion is, all governments of the world must order these workers to keep the log book to note down their customer identity numbers what ever the name we have given to these cards, as every other business people do.

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Poetheart Morgan 27 January 2013

She do your job like others persons do! And sure, deserve respect, primarily by men who use them.the same who accuse is the same that corrupt and deflowers

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Valerie Dohren 25 January 2013

Prostitutes would not do this kind of work if they didn't need to - and it's the pimps who have a lot to answer to. Very good Nader.

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Unwritten Soul 23 January 2013

Judging people by once glance may illuminate you a big error out of truth, if we really care we never push others but raise them to better place and show the true direction. We never better than others if we never try make other better than we are (our own thought) . Nice poem dear poet, thanks for inviting._Soul

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 23 January 2013

Wow dear Nader.! again wow! see? it shows how humanity is going to be killed. we all sometimes are guilty in order to the others. lots of wicked humans will use others. and if the others are sinking in poverty or a disgrace situation, chastity and the other moralities will be sold and killed. Dark angel is a real true perfect poem my pal. Well done. Ellias.

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Stevie Taite 23 January 2013

Very nonjudgmental. Full of understanding. Very nicely put together. Really touching. Thanks!

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Kelvin Owusu 23 January 2013

this is beautiful work, good on you for showing love and not judgement

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