Dark Angel Comments

A clever poem but as Muneerah writes one or two spelling mistakes ruin it a little. Nevertheless I understand it's meaning. Keep on writing Arianne as the talent is in there.

I love the comparison. You need to watch out for grammatical errors in spelling though. A nice piece.

I wonder which side will win the battle...

Hmm... I love the way you described so clearly the battle within the person, the change... it was really well written! :)

A great poem, like it, a great write.