I look in to your eyes,
I see God,
I see Satan.
angels now consume you,
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I love the comparison. You need to watch out for grammatical errors in spelling though. A nice piece.
Hmm... I love the way you described so clearly the battle within the person, the change... it was really well written! :)
A clever poem but as Muneerah writes one or two spelling mistakes ruin it a little. Nevertheless I understand it's meaning. Keep on writing Arianne as the talent is in there.