Thursday, November 5, 2009

Dark And Rainy Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was a dark and rainy day.
It matched my mood perfectly.
I went to stand out in the cold windy air,
So at least then I would feel more than just the pain inside me.
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Alexandra Reiss
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 16 November 2009

So at least then I would feel more than just the pain inside me. The rain whipped cold and fierce droplets against my face. It was wonderful. This is really wonderful, great feeling as Joe said, very spontaneous. It matches my mood too. I am impressed by this little cute poem, the small wonder. Keep it up, Ale...10/10. Best wishes Naseer

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Joseph Poewhit 05 November 2009

Real great feeling, that rain.

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