Dark And Gloomy Comments

Your use of capitalization at the beginning of lines which continue from a previous line makes it difficult on the reader. Simple lower cases would make this poem much stronger. I know you hate me, but it's true. ~Fil

Hey i love your work Marilyn especially this line: ' And it is September Just like the time before But this time you will not See me I December I will be gone' Nice and tragic which i like Ciao ciao