Saturday, April 12, 2008

Dark And Cold Comments

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the light shines in my eyes
but all i see is darkness
for the world has turned cold and dark
as i seek for joy
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ezzabell fanning
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Sarah Abdullah 12 April 2008

I Really like how each word contrast the other the juxtaposition is so clear: the light shines in my eyes but all i see is darkness thx for sharing ^^

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