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Dark Allies on an empty street,
Only silence fills the gaps.
Nothing shines to give a guide,
Or inspires one to step inside.
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Thnx melivin, altho I was using Heaven as a metaphor. In this poem, I tried to describe how I see Love through previous experiences.
Very interesting poem for sure, I should say it definitely is a fantasy due to the fact my belief is if you make it to Heaven, it's not a visit, it's where you'll have everlasting life. Having said that, it's a very good poem Shirley. I gave it a (10) .--Melvina--
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10/30/2025 9:39:31 PM # 1.0.0
Very nice i think it deserves a ten!