Friday, March 2, 2018

Dark Abyss Of Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the unknown dark abyss of mind
When gloom and frustration twined
Which you oftentimes couldn't escape
Those things clothed in black drape
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Carl Roussell 17 April 2019

I like the positive message in this well written poem. A 10

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Bipasha D 23 April 2019

I am so glad to know you liked the poem. Thank you :)

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Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

Besides your insight, the rhyme and rhythm of the poem are poetic devices to admire. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Bipasha.

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 April 2018

Hi Bipasha Bhagawathi Gita says Uddharet aatman aatmanam Na aatamanam avasadayet Aatmasya hi aatmano Bandhur- aatmaiva ripuratmana. You also tend to say the same in this poem. Great reading...

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Bipasha D 17 April 2018

Thank you. You are a learned man!

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Chinedu Dike 14 March 2018

Fine and lofty verse with rhythmic splendour. Poignant work of art, elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Awesome creation from a sober and an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing Bipasha and do remain enriched.

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Bipasha D 15 March 2018

Thanks a lot for all your praise

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 March 2018

Into the mind's deep recess! ! But to press on with the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nudershada Cabanes 02 March 2018

We cannot fathom the dark abyss of mind but we have the strenth and the power to overcome the darkness.10

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Bipasha D 02 March 2018

Thanks a lot for reading, commenting and giving such generous rating.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2018

A motivating piece of with a precise message! The third stanza is the epitome! Thanks for sharing. 10

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Bipasha D 02 March 2018

Thank you so much for reading, commenting and giving such generous rating.

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