In the unknown dark abyss of mind
When gloom and frustration twined
Which you oftentimes couldn't escape
Those things clothed in black drape
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Besides your insight, the rhyme and rhythm of the poem are poetic devices to admire. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Bipasha.
Hi Bipasha Bhagawathi Gita says Uddharet aatman aatmanam Na aatamanam avasadayet Aatmasya hi aatmano Bandhur- aatmaiva ripuratmana. You also tend to say the same in this poem. Great reading...
Fine and lofty verse with rhythmic splendour. Poignant work of art, elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Awesome creation from a sober and an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing Bipasha and do remain enriched.
Into the mind's deep recess! ! But to press on with the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
We cannot fathom the dark abyss of mind but we have the strenth and the power to overcome the darkness.10
A motivating piece of with a precise message! The third stanza is the epitome! Thanks for sharing. 10
Thank you so much for reading, commenting and giving such generous rating.
I like the positive message in this well written poem. A 10
I am so glad to know you liked the poem. Thank you :)