Saturday, October 15, 2011

Dark Ablution Comments

Rating: 5.0

Translucent movement
What can you see?
Enveloping the city, death and misery
Sub zero reveals your breath
Something in the air to ponder who will die next
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Louis Cecile
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Vipins Puthooran 18 October 2011

Beautiful vocabulary you penned all with grace.. Good poem..Top marks

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