Dark Comments

yes good write indeed...........I request you to read my poems...Thanks.

Great work. its really the need of time. Keep it up.

A dark and foreboding write with our imagination set free the supernatural always seems near! A great intense write!

a great write indeed with super thoughts conveyed. a diffrent poem as usual.

I liked the poem, I also agree with Brian that it is an extremely dark portrayal of the supernatural. I would also like to hear from the Poet herself, as to her reasons for writing it. I also underpin that statement by saying In a positive way that is. I am interested in her take of the subject matter. The repetition of the end line rhyme a, a, b, b, a shows partial construction, yet the free form flows particularly well. a good write that I had to ponder on.

An extremely dark portrayal of the supernatural and the occult everyone of us fears at some point, great read. Bri Mar

Lead kindly light amidst the encircling DARKNESS! A great write and thanks for sharing.

it is quite dark. But you are talking about something real, real monster, while the first part of your poem suggests you are fighting with your own darkness. I dont like real monsters, prefer to deal with my own darkness. Good luck!