Thursday, September 4, 2008

Dark Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do you see how deep darkness can be,
desired destiny in your way,
with tightly tinted eyes that see a different
world,
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Elizabeth Tyease Collins
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very deep i love it great poem 10+++++ No Reason To Care

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Kyle Jones 14 September 2008

I don't know why but this poem especially stands out as extraordinary to me

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<font color=black>Nagourta 05 September 2008

Hey, sorry if I sound a bit stingy, but please for the sake of your future readers change 'sarkness' to 'Darkness.' The 'S' will bother some as me...

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Evaughn Gray 04 September 2008

That's an awsome poem i loved it 100! ! lol i loved the poem ~LuV hAzEl

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Elizabeth Tyease Collins

Elizabeth Tyease Collins

Lovesick (Ewing) , Nj
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