Tuesday, February 20, 2007

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Please silence for the spoken one speaks
but his language is common, overly used
To be left out in the dark
In the cold
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James Wakelin
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Tj Becker 29 October 2008

I really like the format of your poem and the play on words. A creative write definitely not like all others. Excellent write

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Sofia P 21 July 2007

Ah, the art of playing with words...! Brilliant! Entertaining, exhilarating, but deeply sad inside... I wonder how many understand this game... I share your love for the paradox: 'deaf ears that hear', 'silence speaks'. Our poems most likely share the same inspiration. How else could we both use the same references? Can't wait to read more from you!

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