Darjeeling Comments

beautiful, i never been to Darjeeling the place seemed amazing before but after reading this piece i wish i was there to witness the beauty my self

Now you've got the idea.....keep writing, you can only get better and better! You've got the gift. Pat yourself on the back my boy, ya done good! Cheers! (There's room for polish....tense for example, at the beauty he bring.....should read, at the beauty he brings.)

singing and moving all are so sweet, I like it, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.