Daring To Hope Again Comments
It hasn't even been a year
Since my heart was badly broken
And all the words I longed to say
Were put to rest, unspoken
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But something just won't let me quit There's light around the bend So, my bruised heart and I move on, Daring to hope again...... Life is a journey from pessimism to optimism... Conclusion is good...we have to move...Love
I always like my poems to have a resolution, and a happy ending! : -)
I've had much more than my fair share Of disappointment, heartache That I was doomed to loneliness Was a feeling I could not shake.. Heartbreaking
Those nights I cried, in agony As though my world would end I only wanted to be held By an understanding friend.... So cute and lovely line...love
It hasn't even been a year Since my heart was badly broken And all the words I longed to say Were put to rest, unspoken... First stanza is awesome....
Thank you, Louis. The willingness to share is only half of the equation, The real challenge is in finding a suitable person who is also willing to share. It's impossible to share alone! : -)
The last stanza is really good - nice expression of hope. A 10.
Thank You, Carl. For the praise for the last stanza, as well as for rating!
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7/18/2025 8:09:13 AM # 1.0.0
10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ with love
Thank you, Prabir. I hope that this one shows up. Sometimes a rating doesn't come through, for whatever reason.