Wednesday, March 17, 2010

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(Legend decrees: whoever shall enter her at midnight,
On this day, shall disappear forever.)

I NEVER REFUSE A DARE!
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Kim Davies
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Sean Williams 19 March 2010

I really like this one. I love the way the pace quickens in the third and fourth verses, making it a very tense, exciting read.

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Lesley Merrin 17 March 2010

This is eerie. I like the ending wondering leaving the reader wondering what has happened. Hinted at left open which is always more frightening because the imagination is worse than reality. Excellent.

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