Tuesday, September 9, 2008

Dare We Forget? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I catch somehow
The view of inside tears.
In eyes that peer behind
That furrowed brow.
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Fay Slimm
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Sandra Fowler 21 September 2008

Extraordinary. You have painted a memorable poem picture. This one has my applause. As always, Sandra

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Don Pearson 16 September 2008

This made my hair stand on end. Similar in purpose to my TeignmouthNews but much better expressed. Thanks. Don

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David Threadgold 13 September 2008

Hi Fay How could we forget when you bring the memories so cleverly back to mind. Well done Regards Dave T. **10** definately

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Susan Jarvis 11 September 2008

A clever title, a poignant message. Exceptionally well penned. S: (

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Bob Blackwell 09 September 2008

Fay lots of feeling here Fay, I read it slow and the hurt came through. To many bombs dropped in error, no feeling there. Bob

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Ron Flowers 09 September 2008

Faye, this is a wonderful poem. It is beautifully penned and the content tugs at my heart and brings a tear or two. Ron

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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