I catch somehow
The view of inside tears.
In eyes that peer behind
That furrowed brow.
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This made my hair stand on end. Similar in purpose to my TeignmouthNews but much better expressed. Thanks. Don
Hi Fay How could we forget when you bring the memories so cleverly back to mind. Well done Regards Dave T. **10** definately
A clever title, a poignant message. Exceptionally well penned. S: (
Fay lots of feeling here Fay, I read it slow and the hurt came through. To many bombs dropped in error, no feeling there. Bob
Faye, this is a wonderful poem. It is beautifully penned and the content tugs at my heart and brings a tear or two. Ron
Extraordinary. You have painted a memorable poem picture. This one has my applause. As always, Sandra