Saturday, January 26, 2008

Dare To Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

When your offspring flies the nest
You have mixed feelings when you rest.
The house is quite like a tomb
There is an empty feeling in the womb.
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Mamta Agarwal
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Richard Jarboe 05 June 2008

Great poem. The feeling of emptiness is the first feeling before filling up again, and that starts with dreams. Take care, Richard

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 March 2008

sometimes words could moved human's perceptions to life....

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Sylvi Sylva 26 January 2008

Mamta, how brilliantly written - love it. voted.

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Neil Marsden 26 January 2008

Wow! The highs and lows within this piece of work are unsettling and amazing! Well done! Neil.

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