Thursday, May 14, 2009

Dare I Say? ....Lovelorn Meandrings Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dare I say? no sin!
Just a dab with gin
What has to be shall be!
None but self to see
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Yasmin Khan 25 April 2013

A lyrical love poem like a skylark sings in the sky... 'Desire snows melts Swirls in streaming belts In its own wake Makes languishing lakes', beautiful metaphors!

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Vidi Writes 08 June 2009

Its a river that meanders down The spinal column of one's Life. These thoughts have Oceanic depth The reader profoundly tugged With an emotional temper. Good one indeed.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Amazing verse, love it.

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Fiona Davidson 17 May 2009

Excellent writing Saadat...10+++

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