Monday, July 2, 2018

Dare I Encumber It In Words Comments

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Blossoming, a bed of roses dare I
pick just one, and encumber it in words
to compare its charm to her wakening eyes;
from my hand to hers
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 July 2018

Beauty of bed of rose is very motivational joy. Beauty never dies in memory rather it fills love by blooming. One amazing rose is picked up and worded with beauty of feelings. An amazing poem is excellently penned...10

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Rini Shibu 02 July 2018

Beauty of words well penned

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Robert Murray Smith 02 July 2018

When love is encumbered by words it is heard. An imaginative write intertwining love, nature and language.++10

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