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जो मेहनत की खाते है,
वो कभी नफरत नही फैलाते।
जो नफरत फैलाते है,
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Wahhh. Khoob likha hai apne. Ayesa kuch purane urdu lekhak likhte thai. Beautiful lines on havoc.
Very well writ and topical as well. If the poet Rajnish Manga has a lot to say about this poem, it has to so without doubt.
Thank you for appreciating the poem, Sir. I would be lucky to have your precious view about my poem The wind an extreme Instance Thank you
To hate is easy, its love that takes effort. Nice one. Work on the form of Gazal.
जो नफरत फैलाते है, वो कभी मेहनत की नही खाते।- A beautiful poem on life. Nicely crafted too.... Thank you for sharing with us. pc
Ramaney Jagdish ka sijda hai tujhe, Jagdish! Agar jag mein ho aman-pyaar ki baatey|.... //.... A sublime message for a lasting peace in the world.
(2) A group or a political party which wants their ideology to supersede all others through divisive means or even through violence needs to be condemned firmly by one and all. The ghazal format can be perfected through constant practice. Try to read ghazals by classical poets as well as contemporary composers. Thanks for sharing this significant poem, Dear Friend.
thank you sir! i am trying to be good in ghazals. it's my first try.
thank you, sir! im trying to be good in ghazals. it's my first try.
(1) I sincerely appreciate your efforts which are there in the form of this ghazal. The central theme has been treated with sensitivity and with seriousness that it deserves. The purveyors of hate and their policies have no place in a civilised society.
Achchi koshish hai. Maqami rang ghalib hai. You may like to read my ars poetica named, Poetic Sense-1. Thank you.
Very nice poem. Hatred needs to be curbed and expunged from our hearts. People who spread hatred are real enemy of humanity. Keep writing to spread your message of love. Best wishes for your bright future.
well as I said Hindi is zeroly 4 me but PG has said words of praise believe him I ALWAYS DO
Very beautiful poem...you are a young port of genuine talent...God bless you..a great future ahead.... thanks
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Desh prem aur matra bhumi se lagaw ek sache insaan ki nishaniyan hai... Koi bhi ye bardasht nahi kar sakta, Atank ye ek political drama hai...Kabhi na kabhi ye aag bhi bhjh jayegi.
Khair, zindagi ki baate'ñ chalti rahe'ñ/ bandagi ki bate'ñ chalti rahe'ñ|