Tuesday, December 3, 2013

Dappled Gold Comments

Rating: 5.0

There they lie ‘neath silver clouds
Dappled gold, dappled gold,
Wrapped in iridescent shrouds
Oh so cold, oh so cold.
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Valerie Dohren
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Payal Parande 17 August 2014

each time i read your poem i fall in love with them more and more, you are so brilliant and the emotions you bring with them are so deep and so calmly expressed i am just speechless ma'am you are just brilliant and so beautiful

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Kevin Patrick 15 January 2014

If Sandy Denny were alive today I could just picture her singing something like this, magical.

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John Brown 16 December 2013

In a word - beautiful.

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Hazel Durham 09 December 2013

Stunning write full of memories to hold and treasure, dappled gold forever in your heart.

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Lyn Paul 07 December 2013

I can feel your heartache in these golden words. Words so angelic. thank you

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Paul Brookes 06 December 2013

A beautiful poem. You write so well of the lost soul, the lost love, youo put into words what all of us have felt at times. Thanks for sharing 10/10 BB : O)

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Dee Corpolongo 05 December 2013

Val.... as always, you wrote a beautiful poem, that should be a song! ~ So sad and moving, and felt right in the heart., A masterpiece that moves you to tears. Thank you.{{{hugs}}}

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Dinesan Madathil 05 December 2013

The streaks of clouds will rain over, the beams of the sun will descend on ever and your memories may never fade out Valerie.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 December 2013

Golden memories, golden memories Unforgettable, unforgettable. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 04 December 2013

A great poem, the love will always stay.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 04 December 2013

nice poem, i love the imagery thanks for sharing

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