Monday, May 25, 2015

Dappled Dawn Comments

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Dawn breaks like a tea cup.
Dribbling dabs of sunlight
Across the white damask counterpane
Waking me gently from a troubled sleep.
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Impressive work, , from onset to close-out...Your metaphoric play is as astute as your ostensibly natural ability for mellifluous structural movement....Stellar overall craftsmanship, indeed...~FjR~

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Suzanne Hayasaki 25 May 2015

Thank you. I am new to this site. Is there an easy way to find comments and reply to them?

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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