Drip,
Drip,
The dull drool
That drowns out the day;
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This is my kind of poetry- the kind that focuses attention to individual word and phonetic sounds. Your poem is such fun to read, I also love use of idiosyncratic words.
Hi Dante, I remember this one. It's one of my favorites. The alliteration is great and the sound fun despite the fact that I still get a somewhat morbid image of a lifeless body floating along the bank of a river somewhere. Great poem.