Saturday, August 23, 2008

Dante And The Leak Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drip,
Drip,
The dull drool
That drowns out the day;
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Dante' Camerlengo
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Dawn Slanker 27 August 2008

Hi Dante, I remember this one. It's one of my favorites. The alliteration is great and the sound fun despite the fact that I still get a somewhat morbid image of a lifeless body floating along the bank of a river somewhere. Great poem.

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Rose Kolarich 26 August 2008

This is my kind of poetry- the kind that focuses attention to individual word and phonetic sounds. Your poem is such fun to read, I also love use of idiosyncratic words.

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