Saturday, April 9, 2005

Daniel’s Cry! Comments

Rating: 3.6

High in the mountains
Weathered in cold
A man of young
Has now grown old
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Lynette Dias Gouveia
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This is a haunting read. Well-done.

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Mary Nagy 11 April 2005

Very beautifully written poem Lynette! ! I really enjoyed this! Sincerely, Mary

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Herbert Nehrlich1 10 April 2005

Please change caste to cast, also capitalise Utopian. This poem is so full of flavour it begs.......the listener, the reader. Rich images, history, genuine living come through. I love it. H

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