Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Daniel Boone Motel Comments

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Checked into the Daniel Boone Motel in Pikeville, Kentucky, while
Traveling alone and stretched my limbs which were pretty cramped
'Elbow room! ' as Dan'l would say, what a nice respite from psycho
Drivers and zoning out and now my bodymind can get revamped.
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Kevin Scanlon
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 October 2015

Woah to write such an epic out of the imagination in such a realistic way is commendable and awesome. Enjoyed your rhyme schemes as u described and wrote down your muse like a fine travelogue poem. Esp chuckled at n enjoyed the last stanza of the selfie n tripping heh. Kudos. Pls do review my latest poem, I also tend to do epics.

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Liza Sudina 13 October 2015

Very interesting and intensive story about your stay in Motel. though long - I was not bored to read it at all!

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Kevin Scanlon 13 October 2015

Thanks, Liza! Writing a long poem makes me feel like I do not have ADD.

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