Daniel Boone Motel Comments

Woah to write such an epic out of the imagination in such a realistic way is commendable and awesome. Enjoyed your rhyme schemes as u described and wrote down your muse like a fine travelogue poem. Esp chuckled at n enjoyed the last stanza of the selfie n tripping heh. Kudos. Pls do review my latest poem, I also tend to do epics.

Very interesting and intensive story about your stay in Motel. though long - I was not bored to read it at all!